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Flat slabs make perfect grips.
Sharp points make perfect steps.

They tell you not to look down,
And that's exactly why you do.

It looks like a clean, easy drop.
You can feel the air rushing through you,
The rocks rising to meet you in a smooth, soft caress.

Your hands loosen,
And you wonder what it's like.
Blank.
Calm.
Free?

You feel nothing,
And so you feel everything.

Steady now, count the heartbeats.
One.
Two.
Three.

Release.
Critique is always appreciated.
:iconqiuyingquan:
It really feels as though I'm there. Great work!
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